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Wonderful little story

Thanks for submitting this piece of story, funny and at the same time full of meaning.
Do others understand us or just stop at our surface?
And when it's our turn, are we able to understand others or do we also stop at their surface?

The art and animation is good, the music and sounds just fit with it and you really had a wonderful idea and transformed it in a wonderful little story.

Thanks and 10/10

Me review you bizzarro

You is poor on drawing and animation: me give you 2/10, you improve before submit.
Idea, plot is 2/10 and me find it offensive and not funny, me no want to see nuns with huge boobs and sex jokes with jesus. Me not see your flashes and not see next flashes you submit.
Me give you 2/10 music, acappella superman and handjobs for jesus not fit with flash.

That why me give you bad rating.

A good start

This little flash is cute and shows some skill, I give you some hints because I think you have potential:

- drawings: you have your own style and it's nice, but you have to develop it a little further. Hands are "loaf like" and force you to add hints like "shaking". Try harder, I think you can do better than that. 6/10
- animation: simple but well done, the unconscious frame adds something funny to it. 9/10
- music/sounds: the music it's just perfect and fits the flash, on the other way there are no sounds and again you added hints for that. 7/10 as an average.
- plot/idea: a funny little story full of ideas, the yar sign instead od sos is wonderful, the pirate Pete makes me laugh, just a question: the treasure they trade is real or it's a pirate's trick? 10/10

Overall 8/10, I will wait for your next flash matey, marooned or not.

You made something beautiful...again

The original idea was extremely good, but you made it even better working on your drawings (I adore the moving atoms) and adding references for an easier understanding.

The universe is amazing and science tries to make us understand it.
You gave us amazement and knowledge at the same time: thank you.

That's just a start

Nice ironic title, you miss pretty much everything else:
-no istructions
-it's not clear which are bonuses/points and which obstacles
-no plot, no scenario: just a trabant over a table(?)
-controls don't always work after starting
-bugs: after two replays there's your running trabant running endlessly over an empty table
-the vertical cut scene could be enlarged for better control

take my remarks as hints for future developing, as it is now your flash strongly needs to be improved.

Idea took from "Doddle god"

2/10 for the graphics/animation: very simple but not that bad;

2/10 for gameplay: the game is easy to play, not very long lasting;

0/10 for idea/plot: The elements and combinations are just the same of Badim's "Doodle god"submitted on NG: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /540083
Despite your absolute lack of originality seeing this evolution in progress could be nice.

1/10 average. Show us what you can do working on your ideas.

What about "Melting point"

Nice piece of art.
Being "delicious and refreshing" is useless, when the melting point is reached.

Some remarks, but don't tell mom

Good drawing, a bit lacking of environment. I really think the idea of MOM is as simple as good, but it has potential for some more developing.

Instead of DAD's woman dressed in the same purple suit, why don't you explore the possibility of a lovely looking mom, the house-keeping kind of mom that seems sweet and calm and at the same time rules the family with iron fist, making the muscle dad behave during the meals and the little brat tide his room?
Someone dad and his son should love...and fear at the same time?